From patchwork Fri May 18 23:33:56 2018 Content-Type: text/plain; charset="utf-8" MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Transfer-Encoding: 7bit X-Patchwork-Submitter: Michael Tremer X-Patchwork-Id: 1772 Return-Path: Received: from mail01.ipfire.org (mail01.ipfire.org [IPv6:2001:470:7183:25::1]) by web02.i.ipfire.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 81BFF60A29 for ; Fri, 18 May 2018 15:34:23 +0200 (CEST) Received: from mail01.i.ipfire.org (localhost [IPv6:::1]) by mail01.ipfire.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 3CD4010D22E2; Fri, 18 May 2018 14:34:23 +0100 (BST) DKIM-Signature: v=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/relaxed; d=ipfire.org; s=201801; t=1526650463; h=from:from:sender:sender:reply-to:subject:subject:date:date: message-id:message-id:to:to:cc:cc:mime-version:content-type: content-transfer-encoding:in-reply-to:in-reply-to: references:references:list-id:list-unsubscribe:list-subscribe:list-post; bh=QQMD+oOh/kdefLgkvT01fgvTdEQiO7W5ScDAljGMI+Y=; b=wbprWfTycJWZl4Gsr39XCD3q4JwOx0mGh51xXzL9d+NxwJwpylqZjpE0Xj7vKzuHmEaLye W/4HP3+dTB25WlBow/2dKPKpnhzNdNEtCTBentzvj/ZVsMOtxZLUTvF3CFv+EAqeMsw6Jc N2yHH1yKxbRf/03F2VIZntIG6ZaaKpoTD/ddkxHckJxh0v2ztUWuf/EadP5P7il5jxeB0T RIEaAGxNmsdhcE0rrV6e1318iLAGX50J50BXbhOQ0iS9quZK1bYLtshmeD2NrOVepvxJq6 jpdLl70oqmBhFi1PA5sVzkwYetlcFFrg3kTi0IEqZCIwW72pzT+nTcSUejsXfQ== Authentication-Results: mail01.i.ipfire.org; auth=pass smtp.auth=ms smtp.mailfrom=michael.tremer@ipfire.org DKIM-Signature: v=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/relaxed; d=ipfire.org; s=201801; t=1526650448; h=from:from:sender:reply-to:subject:subject:date:date: message-id:message-id:to:to:cc:cc:mime-version:content-type: content-transfer-encoding:in-reply-to:in-reply-to: references:references; bh=QQMD+oOh/kdefLgkvT01fgvTdEQiO7W5ScDAljGMI+Y=; b=Z7Hjdv73PXjSF6adlGRGTwsQuLeOCAq/fMjD2dgWbSFqr9c7ekeIBIfmd3xmjypgWjVL5N zGhADcLxJw6jcYELBrGSjUecoKgEQ6adpeyfebxApy9Kr2iSfQP8/mOkwTcQzWDQyC4u4E zMfNcb0SuhD7+HvIqijBt2rEmUefrtp598SbHi0AzrqYM4cRxekO1/v313wXN5EmchZekT VemO2FKur5sqULAYVbqinVWX6o5Y43Q9g8Q/aRcp3GiqeNx0cUQBZjPrmmt9SHY7VxCpnU EFJCLeHa8Swv1Hb1+JkjN3lFwP5DY7zSJCnpACmd+OH41iLsdewPgMQwmE6szA== Received: from rice-oxley.tremer.co.uk (unknown [88.98.219.132]) (using TLSv1.2 with cipher ECDHE-RSA-AES256-GCM-SHA384 (256/256 bits)) (Client did not present a certificate) by mail01.ipfire.org (Postfix) with ESMTPSA id 79A8D10D22DB; Fri, 18 May 2018 14:34:08 +0100 (BST) From: Michael Tremer To: development@lists.ipfire.org Subject: [PATCH 4/7] man: Improve grammar, spelling and syntax of nitsi.recipe.5 Date: Fri, 18 May 2018 14:33:56 +0100 Message-Id: <20180518133359.2481778-4-michael.tremer@ipfire.org> X-Mailer: git-send-email 2.17.0 In-Reply-To: <20180518133359.2481778-1-michael.tremer@ipfire.org> References: <20180518133359.2481778-1-michael.tremer@ipfire.org> X-Spamd-Result: default: False [-6.30 / 11.00]; ASN(0.00)[asn:56478, ipnet:88.98.216.0/22, country:GB]; DKIM_SIGNED(0.00)[]; TO_DN_SOME(0.00)[]; FROM_HAS_DN(0.00)[]; RCVD_TLS_ALL(0.00)[]; RCPT_COUNT_TWO(0.00)[2]; ARC_NA(0.00)[]; BAYES_HAM(-2.25)[96.46%]; FROM_EQ_ENVFROM(0.00)[]; TO_MATCH_ENVRCPT_ALL(0.00)[]; MID_CONTAINS_FROM(1.00)[]; RCVD_COUNT_ZERO(0.00)[0]; MIME_GOOD(-0.10)[text/plain]; NEURAL_HAM(-2.96)[-0.985,0]; REPLY(-2.00)[] X-Spam-Status: No, score=-6.30 X-Rspamd-Server: mail01.i.ipfire.org Cc: Michael Tremer X-BeenThere: development@lists.ipfire.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.15 Precedence: list List-Id: IPFire development talk List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , Errors-To: development-bounces@lists.ipfire.org Sender: "Development" Signed-off-by: Michael Tremer --- man/nitsi.recipe.xml | 24 +++++++++--------------- 1 file changed, 9 insertions(+), 15 deletions(-) diff --git a/man/nitsi.recipe.xml b/man/nitsi.recipe.xml index 330f33d60b92..73c680dfa9e4 100644 --- a/man/nitsi.recipe.xml +++ b/man/nitsi.recipe.xml @@ -33,7 +33,7 @@ The recipe file contains the actions for a test. - So it consist of lines which state which command should executed on which machine. + It consists of lines which state what commands should be executed on which machine. @@ -41,7 +41,7 @@ Basic Syntax - All lines follows the following syntax: + All lines follow the following syntax: @@ -52,10 +52,9 @@ - The machine name is the first part of the line followed by an ':'. + The machine name is the first part of the line followed by ':'. After the ':' follows the command which should be executed. - @@ -76,10 +75,9 @@ - The '!' is similar to the 'not' in python. So this line will fail if the command succeds - and succeds if the command fails. Between the machine name and the '!' must be a space. + The '!' is similar to the 'not' in python. So this line will fail if the command succeeds + and succeeds if the command fails. Between the machine name and the '!' must be a space. - @@ -92,7 +90,6 @@ This command is executed on all machines of this test. - @@ -102,13 +99,12 @@ - This command is on all machines of the comma seperated list. So on machine1 and on machine2. + This command is on all machines of the comma seperated list. - - + @@ -116,12 +112,11 @@ This will include the recipe of test2. - The path is relativ to the directory of the recipe file which contain the include statement. + The path is relative to the directory of the + recipe file which contains the include statement. - - @@ -139,7 +134,6 @@ include: ../test2 -